Re: Critique this swing.
Critique what swing?
the only thing that anyone could critique is your VERBALIZATION of your "...approach..."
not the best way for you to find out if what you say is, "...an effective swing...", "...rotational or linear...", or "...an effective approach...".
why don't you make a video clip of what you believe to be representative of your verbalization and send it to batspeed.com for Jack to post or send it to Shawn and he might be willing to post it for discussion at his site.
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